So, this story is better suited to being posted in chapter form. A lot of the pages don't make sense/aren't very compelling on their own. When even your girlfriend's interest starts waning, you know you've gotta make some changes.

I think after this chapter is wrapped up, I might go back to my original plan of updating as I get whole chapters done, and posting the whole chapter in one update. But there's a poll up above for you to sound off on what you prefer.